spring break
I went to China for this spring break. It was fun. At the first day, my mother and I went to a park with our dogs. They were so cute that everybody was looking and talking about them. People who were walking by us asked us how old are they. They kept asking me are they your dogs. Their facial expression told me they were jealous. We saw so many cherry trees and they were so beautiful. If you were me, you would take so many pictures for these flowers. My mom told me she had never seen this beautiful scenery before she came here. Then, I found my bicycle and helped to rent one for my mom. Hers was the way prettier than mine. It was pink and white. Its handle had a cartoon sticker. She liked her new bicycle. In the next two hours, we were riding around the park and the wind was blowing through our face. When I stopped by a small pavilion, I saw one of my friends. He came here with his family too. I said hi to him. In the end, I went back home. It was a great day.
Good start! Please make corrections. What kind of dogs do you have? I love dogs! Show me a picture! 16/20
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